Bloodthirsty oh my hobbit !
remind me of george j martin " a game of throne" series
overall it blow my mind , but i have a few picks despite that :
the main character,s head dosent seems to follow her body at all, the whole body is wwell balanced and angled but it was draw like following the regular body proportions rules, unless it was intetionnal, she is roughlty four time her head size, so unless you where drawing a hobbit or a gnome, there is no way she would have a head big like that, also she dosent sseem to have a neck, even at that angle, you could had revealed a few folding on the neck side of the chainmail, that way even if you dont draw the neck, the eye can still spot clues that reveal it.
in fact the same body proportions seems to apply to the other guys behind her, at best i gave em 5 head tall proportions , and they also seems to have their head screwed on their torso.
The Wowzini Brothers 
cheer up 
Dark Angel 
Plant 
Demon's Swing 
Swash and Buckle 
ODST Sniper 
